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: October 31, 2006, 11:16:05 AM

In your article "Gruden Addresses Running Plays, Or Lack Thereof" your use of the word "their" in incorrect.  It should be "there".

“Their needs to be more balance and certainly commitment to the running game,” Gruden said Monday. “Again, yesterday the circumstances, weather-wise, dictated.”



This is a common mistake in writing.  Seriously, good article, just thought I'd point that out.  If PR ever needs an editor, I'd be more than happy to offer my services.


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